Monday, December 12, 2016

Week 11



Good evening.  Turn your brain on!  Today is the last class meeting, and will be devoted to your writing a short essay of 450 -500 words.  The topic list, directions, and requirements will be presented in class.

All paperwork is due today.Yeah!
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Have a great break! I wish you very merry holidays and peace and good will and all that seasonal stuff throughout the new year.  I will miss you all!  Thank you for all the hard work and fun.-*

Monday, December 5, 2016

Week 10






Good afternoon!




Today we will work on the final project/report.   If you have not yet chosen a topic, today is the day to do it.  

Review the stories in the various topical sections of a comprehensive daily outlet, or  a story you have heard something about, get the facts, follow links and other associated articles and then tell the story and what makes the story or reports important or interesting specific ways.  Make a central point (thesis point) about the material you have gathered together. Integrate the several sources as evidence for the point you make.  Compose the short Works Cited list of those sources you have named (cited in the body of the essay). Edit.  Revise.  Put a title on it.  You are done!

     Next week is the last week of class and a short essay assignment will be asked of you from a set of topics that require no research or prior readings. 

Extra Credit:  Go to the Modern Love column at the New York Times online.  Choose from the recent or archived essays one that appeals to you.  All are first-person narrative essays on the subject of romantic love.  Briefly describe (include title and author and post date) the content and then respond to the work by drawing out the associations and thoughts it gives rise to in you.  You may include a story of your own that serves as commentary or illustration of what you find interesting in the piece. 400-500 words, titled.


Monday, November 28, 2016

Week 9








 

The man who has forgotten to be thankful has fallen asleep in life.”   
                                                                                           –Robert Louis Stevenson


 It is week nine, which means of course that we have just two weeks to completion of the quarter.  Thus far you have been assigned a total of 7 essays;   your short research project (5), and the in-class final (6) remain.  The in-class final is to be done in class week 11, not at home.  The field reports are due today.  If you have not yet submitted the short poetry explication  that, too, is due.  We will look at the results of your scoutings from the field (*-*)  and then allow time for the short report work, to discuss potential topics, directions and the MLA guidelines for source integration, and time to begin drafting the short report.  It should be finished by the end of class next week.  Watching a film is a possibility, if you decide.

Research Topics (only suggested)

1.  Threats to the environment and/or the Anthropocene (think human induced climate change, habitat loss, pollution, overfishing).

2.  The technology race. New Products.  Consumerism (or what did you buy on Black Friday, Cyber Monday?)

3.  The economy/money matters.

4.  Education and emploment/career planning and management.

5.  The struggle to legitimize gay marriage/ marijuana use/ protect women's reproductive rights/ you-name-it.

6.  Fashion/art in the 21st century.

7.  Great food ideas/new trends in culinary arts and/ or agricultural practice.

8.  New media/new opportunities.

9.  A film study, new or old.

10. An individual or company making a positive or negative difference.


I can look at drafts today of whatever work you have in progress, time permitting.  Rewrites and any outstanding assignments must be submitted by the last class.

Again,  week 11 a  final essay of 500 words will assess key composition skills, including grammatical sentences, unified and well-developed paragraphs, support for your thesis, sound use of references, and use of direct quotation, if called for.  You will have a set of topics to choose from and no required reading.  The Internet will not be allowed as a source of content.  This final must be done in class.

Monday, November 21, 2016

Week 8



Good evening, class.  Hope you are doing well.  The quarter is quickly advancing, and our work will soon be finished.  Today I will return the graded final narrative drafts and any other paperwork you have submitted.  The plan is to review the field work assigned, the final draft work of your image-based research essay, allow for some readings and review, and practice work.  We may next week watch a film.  In the past I have shown Where the Boys Are (1960), directed by Henry Levin, a coming-of-age story that was filmed in Ft.Lauderdale.  The subject matter, courtship, and the risks posed, is perennial. The film could be used as the basis of an individual research paper or an extra-credit essay. Perhaps you'd prefer something different.  It's a Wonderful Life, a classic Christmas story and multi-award winning film that was directed by Frank Capra and released in 1946, comes to mind.  I'll take suggestions. Perhaps Ex Machina (2015), a film about artificial intelligence starring Alicia Vikander, who recently won an Academy Award.


A film review traditionally lets the public know in so many ways whether a film is worth its salt.  The reviewer summarizes the basic conflict and plotting, setting, cast of characters, and central theme(s), and how it all plays.  A film may succeed in some ways, and fail in others, and is rarely reducible to blanket judgment.  That said, good critics can make us aware of weaknesses and strengths we might not perceive on our own, specifics of a film’s construction, scenes, dialogue, performances, emotional appeal, etcetera. A film may spark debate about issues, focus attention on important social or cultural concerns or historical representations, including those of race, gender, class, and law. The reviewer should strive for accuracy of representation where objectivity can be had, but the reviewer’s personal experience of watching the film and critical opinions reflect his or her individuality and rightly so. Often the film is an opening to discussion of current events and issues.

   The climax of Where the Boys Are (1960), which turns on the rape of a female college student too distraught and helpless, apparently, to give much resistance, might make for an interesting short report on the legal definition and punishment of rape today (and historically), or how colleges address rape on campus.   Some recent reports have focused on the case of a Stanford male student named Brock Turner, convicted of raping a young woman.  He was set for release after serving 3 months of a 6-month sentence in prison.  Other reports focus on violence against women on campuses, which may be on the increase (see Kelly Oliver's "There Is No Such Thing as 'Nonconsensual Sex.' It's Violence." at the Nytimes.com). The URL below provides an interesting historical view of the legal ramifications of rape over time. 

http://www.thedailybeast.com/witw/articles/2013/08/22/redefining-rape-tackles-the-the-rape-of-citizenship.html


A detailed description of writing the film report itself can be viewed at the following URL:  https://twp.duke.edu/uploads/media_items/film-review-1.original.pdf
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You must soon begin researching the final project, which is to be 600-750 words in full MLA format (all sources documented).  I encourage you to focus on a fresh, timely subject (or make it fresh, show its currency) about which much information and perspective can readily be found, and that you have a personal stake in, by which I mean the subject really does matter to you.  Your writing will thus convey greater credibility.



--------------Presenting Poetry--------

In a poem by Tony Hoagland called “The Best Moment of the Night,” he writes about an informal dinner party.  The human guests are gathered around a table and beneath it is a dog whose eager affection strikes a chord in the poet and creates a “moment” (line 1).  The dog, “down near the base of the butcher-block table/ just as the party was getting started” (lines 2-3) makes him understand something about his own isolation.  He seems lovelorn, and when that dog offers up its belly to be petted–“the vulnerable belly” (line 18)– he momentarily admires it, and is warmed by it, for the dog is still “panting, and alive, and seeking love”(line 19) in a way that he, as a human, can’t readily do in front of the gathered guests. 

Lines of poetry should be integrated into the text body unless greater than three successive lines, and slashes and line citations used in text as references.  The title and author must be identified of course.  You should use the author's last name alone after the initial full name reference.

Classwork:  Compose a 250-word explication addressing the theme of the poem selected (TBA).  Use the MLA format for presenting  text in direct quotation and be sure to identify title and author. The composition should offer a reading of the poem and your response to its contents.

Monday, November 14, 2016

Week 7




 
  
The man who has forgotten to be thankful has fallen asleep in life.”   
                                                                                           –Robert Louis Stevenson


 It is week seven.   Today you have due the finals of the narrative, and time to work on the final drafts of the short research piece submitted last week, the rough drafts of which I will return today. We have just five weeks to completion of the quarter, including one week on holiday.  Thus far you have been assigned a total of 3 essays, including rough drafts and the final drafts; these include the summary/response (1), the autobiographical narrative (2), and the short research essay with an image focus (#3).

The field report (4) is coming due soon, as will be a short research project (5), and lastly, the in-class final (6).  The in-class final is to be done in class week 10 or 11, not at home.  The field reports are described below (reposted from last week's page) and due week 9.

Essay 4 (due week 8 or 9, 500 words):  An EyeWitness/Field Report:  You must attend in person a local event, community function, business enterprise, entertainment venue, museum, restaurant or hotel establishment, nature preserve or park, area of historical interest, etcetera– in order to gather information from direct experience.  You cannot rely on the reports of others or the site's own published information alone.  The writing of the piece requires you bring to readers the vicarious experience of being there in person. themselves; that is, by engaging readers in your own experience on the ground.  Background research may help fill out and provide context for the report of course, and you are encouraged to find out as much as you can in the way of origins or history of the establishment, event or area for possible inclusion in the report.  
  An alternative or additional inclusion is the interview or profile, which we will look at today in example form.

     Reviews and descriptions of cultural fare–of nature parks, historical attractions, art exhibits and fairs, live music shows, restaurants, bars, and clubs old and new, sporting events, lectures, book signings and discussions, community classes and workshops –serve to inform people of what's going on about town and provide them incentive to get out and experience some of what the area has to offer.     In this assignment you must report on a local place or local event from an eye-witness perspective–you must go there, experience whatever is on offer, and write about it in such a way that readers feel they have gotten to see and know the place through your first-hand experience of it.
     The particular focus and perspective you bring to your subject,   your knowledge and ideas and observations of it, and the degree of interest and engagement with the subject you show–these are central to the essay’s success.  Whether you are visiting a park, a beach, a museum, theater, restaurant,  yoga studio, even a cemetery (we have a delightful one nearby that is a birder's mecca), etcetera–descriptions of the scene or environs, the activity, the individual artworks, performances, ambiance, food, service, etcetera will bring the piece to life and convey a you-are-there sensation to readers.  Your readers will be relying on your knowledge, powers of observation and storytelling abilities.    Your informed judgment, taste, and opinions will be an important element.   approach you create, the thesis idea controlling and unifying the work, will make for certain selections and emphases that reflect you the observer, your history, interests, tastes, etc.  
    The eye-witness report is a species of primary research.  You may find you want background reading on whatever aspects of your subject require context, to fully develop your thesis or main ideas.  To repeat, this essay will require you actually go somewhere in person and record material facts and observations before putting the piece together.  Your thesis tells you what to include, to emphasize, and what to ignore.  The essay should run a minimum of 5oo-6oo words, including introductory, body, and closing paragraphs, and title.

          Remember the who, what, where, when, why roster of specifics.


    Read the following article about a favorite getaway destination of Swedes and as you do notice how the author includes specifics of place, his personal journey, and the cultural context of Gotland. This is the form you want to model, however near and familiar your focus destination.  You will be a personal guide to your readers, revealing a place in all its particular appeal:
   
      This assignment provides you opportunity to travel locally and write about the experience. In fact, the road trip form has a particular free and spontaneous quality to it that you may want to try or incorporate in part.   Look here at how the author begins his report/profile of Lynda Barry, a well-know cartoonist and storyteller, who teaches workshops targeted to non-writers or those who have almost given up:  http://www.nytimes.com/2011/10/30/magazine/cartoonist-lynda-barry-will-make-you-believe-in-yourself.html
   
     Field reporting often involves character sketches and narrative work.  The story element must be made stimulating for readers to feel transported. The story involves you and the featured subject of your work.


       Remember:  this is not to be a story about a trip or place visited some time in your past.  It is to be undertaken as an investigation of sorts with the writing in mind.  Take notes!  Your writing must be authenticated by particular observations drawn from the field.  Local subjects only:  Monroe, Collier, Dade, Broward, or Palm Beach county.

If you visit an exhibit,  include the museum or site name, location, and featured artist(s), including the exhibit’s run dates in your report. Focus would necessarily be on some theme observed in one or more works or overall.  You would identify representative works (by title) and present a verbal description–medium, size, subject, form, and color–so that readers can "see" the work and understand the conclusions you draw from it.  

If you visit a natural area, try to tie the visit in to some current news (a news "hook") or ongoing area of interest (natural history/studies, ecology, environmental justice, marine life, art) to create audience appeal, to lend purpose and weight to the piece.  

If you like to eat and drink, explore.  Food culture is of great interest to many these days and offers many choices for primary research or "eye-witness" reports–green markets, restaurants, bars, etcetera.

If you go to a museum the primary focus would be to see the various exhibits and selectively cover what you find most interesting.  The URL of the NSU Museum of Art on Las Olas:  http://nsuartmuseum.org  

In fact, there are several museums in the downtown area, including  The Old Ft. Lauderdale 

Historical Museum and another devoted to science and discovery.


     The field report (#4), 500-700 words, will be due week 8 or 9, with a week for rewrites should they be needed. 
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Essay 5 :  Short research report with MLA Works Cited list:  in 600 words or more report on a topic or issue with contemporary relevance about which you can find timely, authoritative primary and secondary source material, as in recently published news, scientific reports or articles, reviews, books,  films or photos, etcetera.  Title the piece and double-space the lines.  Include in-text references to source material and a Works Cited list arranged in alphabetical order.

Your thesis should be clear early in the paper and provide you a means of knowing what material to include and what not.  Ask yourself : Does this source or material contribute to "proving" or elaborating my point? If so, include it; if not, don't.  Know your purpose and the direction you want to take readers by final draft.  Initial stages may feel like so much groping in the dark and that's fine, but by the end you should have learned where you want to go and what you want to say in certain terms.

Due week 10.



Research Topics (only suggested)

1.  Environment, nature, conservation issues (think climate change, habitat loss, pollution, species "news", green trends).

2.   Technology.  New Products. Trends. An individual, corporation, or industry to watch, making a difference, positive or negative, perhaps something like Tesla, started by Elon Musk.

3.  The economy/ best ways to stretch a dollar, money management.

4.  Diet, nutrition, health.

5..  Great food ideas/new trends in culinary arts and/ or agricultural practice/ legal marijuana, etcetera.

6.  New media–new opportunities/new challenges:  Facebook, Twitter, Instagram.

7.  Culture review: fashion, film, art, celebrity life, sports, politics.

8.  Gender politics, reproductive rights, marriage and family today– whatever the issue.

Popular News and Editorial Sites: You are certainly not limited to the following sources, but they should provide ample means to do the work assigned.

npr.org

slate.com

huffingtonpost.com

truthdig.com

salon.com

theguardian.com

bloomberg.com

democracynow.org

nasa.gov

nytimes.com



I will look at whatever work you have in progress, time permitting.  

Again,  week 10 or 11 a  final essay of 450-500 words will assess key composition skills, including grammatical sentences, unified and well-developed paragraphs, support for your thesis, and sound use of references and direct quotation, if called for.  You will have a set of topics to choose from and perhaps a required reading.  The Internet may thus be a source of content.  This final must be done in class.

Monday, November 7, 2016

Week 6




Marilyn Monroe, by artist Andy Warhol
                                        
Good day, class.  Hope you are well!  



      Today I'll return work submitted last week and review the draft assigned of a short report (#3) 

that takes as its subject, trigger or close association a visual artifact, one that is 

in the public realm.    You were to choose a photograph, drawing, painting, short film, cartoon, 

advertisement–one that offers itself to visual analysis along aesthetic lines, journalistic and/or 

commercial ones. Keep in mind, too, that many visuals include text in the form of captions, thought 

or dialogue bubbles, signage, and these are part of the total picture.

     This writing is to present, explain, and discuss whatever subject is brought into focus by the 

image(s) you choose to work with.   Provide a history or account of the image, a reading of 

its context, purpose, visual form, impact or significance. The visuals should be carefully 

integrated, described, discussed and/or interpreted in the essay body.  You might choose a favorite 

artist whose work inspires you; an important or news-making artwork or one that simple speaks to 

you in some way; a clever animation or touching short film; a Youtube or other post that has been

getting a lot of attention. You can Google  iconic image or simple follow the link here posted and 

perhaps find an image to stir your imagination and intellectual curiosity. 

You will need a visual, your primary source focus, and one or two other secondary information sources.   We will address any difficulties or questions and finish the draft in class.  It is due today.



Below is an example of a short report from a previous quarter, on the topic of creativity we reviewed last week. At the time, no visuals were required but one appears here to illustrate the theme:



On Being Creative
A recent article in the New York Times titled "Learning to Think Outside the Box," by Laura Pappano, reports that college degrees are now being awarded in the study of creativity and that those who earn such degrees, by some accounts, have proved themselves to be creative problem solvers, people who can think outside of the box, which might make them strong candidates in the current job market as certain employers prize creativity.  It may seem awkward to speak of majoring or minoring in creativity per say, that is, separate from any specific field or endeavor, and in fact in several of the courses mentioned the work required appears rather academic, a traditional process requiring study of the literature on creativity and representative individuals, personal observation and self-reflection, analysis of a problem, discovery, and invention:
In Dr. Burnett’s Introduction to Creative Studies survey course, students explore definitions of creativity, characteristics of creative people and strategies to enhance their own creativity. These include rephrasing problems as questions, learning not to instinctively shoot down a new idea (first find three positives), and categorizing problems as needing a solution that requires either action, planning or invention. A key objective is to get students to look around with fresh eyes and be curious. The inventive process, she says, starts with “How might you…”
If the course were Composition 101, similar strategies might be used to enhance student awareness of how good writing gets done.  The centrality of trial and error to all creative endeavour is a key takeaway in creativity studies; one teacher dubbed his course “Failure 101” to emphasize the fact.  Indeed, “his favorite assignment” sounds much like a writing assignment:  “Construct a résumé based on things that didn’t work out and find the meaning and influence these have had on your choices.”  He asks students to connect the dots in their life, and to redefine failure in the context of the larger journey.  Indeed, I believe we accomplish little if we are unwilling to risk failure or to grope our way instinctively through the psychological turmoil and darkness of inexperience, ignorance, and, at times, ineptitude.  But we must till we find our footing, else we risk accomplishing little and losing touch with that which gives life real zest, meeting the challenges life poses. 
Humans are naturally creative, we have had to be in order to survive; our world is increasingly a world of made things and the best of them, utilitarian or artistic, serve to make living easier and richer:  a chair provides comfortable rest, a bowl, fork and spoon practical means of conveying food to our mouths, clothing warmth and protection, and story, poetry, music, film and all the arts ancient and modern, above all, sustenance for our souls.  The more we develop our creative capacities the more potential we have to enhance our lives and those of others.  The old myth is that creative endeavor requires some sort of divine gift or genius, but giftedness may be greatly overrated.  Friedrich Nietzsche wrote in Human, All-Too Human (1878) about the process artists must dedicate themselves to in order to achieve greatness:
Artists have a vested interest in our believing in the flash of revelation, the so-called inspiration . . .[shining] down from heaven as a ray of grace.  In reality, the imagination of the good artist or thinker produces continuously good, mediocre, and bad things, but his judgment, trained and sharpened to a fine point, rejects selects, connects . . . All great artists and thinkers [are] great workers, indefatigable not only in inventing, but also in rejecting, sifting, transforming, ordering.         (qtd. in Shenk)
            One has only to read the history of any great artist to discover the artist’s commitment to a process whereby natural endowments or talents were honed by experience and training and a sense of purpose that outweighed the considerable difficulties of achieving work of great merit. Stephen McCranie, a young commercial cartoonist, writes and illustrates a blog called DoodleAlley  recounting, among other topics,  his creative “issues” in a fresh and clear style, some of which the frame here illustrates.
            At  Youtube, a marvelous addition to the world of made things, one can watch the posts of the ice skating finals at the Sochi Winter Olympics, and marvel at the athletic skill, power, daring, and grace of reigning champion Yuan-Kim and others in faraway Russia, long after the games have ended, or listen to the recordings of artists and thinkers now dead.  Today we have so many sources and models of inspired work we can feel overwhelmed, but the problems and challenges of the 21st century remain and will require news ways of thinking to meet them. It seems to me creativity is part and parcel of surviving and thriving. 
Shenk, David.  The Genius In All Of Us.  New York. Random House, 2011. Print.
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At Slatethere appears an article on the anniversary of the Woodstock musical fest and photos of a photographer working for Rollingstone magazine. Another piece describes an exhibit in Los Angeles that documents the current refugee crisis, the largest in human history, according to the U.N. 
In an older article, the author looks at political cartoons as a rather worn form and praises visuals that pack a "wallop," as for example infographics.


Here is an interesting article on photography, which models a visual presentation followed by discussion of its significance, in the very way you might do:  http://www.nytimes.com/2015/08/23/magazine/shadows-in-sao-paulo.html?ribbon-ad-idx=17&rref=homepage&module=Ribbon&version=origin&region=Header&action=click&contentCollection=Home%20Page&pgtype=article



Alain de Botton, author and philosopher, started a school in London to teach important things that do not get enough attention in most curriculums.  "The School of Life" posts short animated lessons that are lively, fun, and informative, as for example this one on the importance of children's art: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Gqe1navZYA&list=PLwxNMb28XmpckOvZZ_AZjD7WM2p9-6NBv&index=3

On TED, Rachel Sussman presents her work on the oldest continuously living organisms on earth.


Citing Sources in MLA Style

To document your research sources, whether from an article in print or online, an encyclopedia or dictionary item, an interview source, a film, photograph, illustration or other visual material– there is a standard means.  
       The primary reference is the author of the source, whose last name provides the key or first word to the source item as it is entered on the Works Cited page.  This page contains an alphabetical list of all the sources cited in the report. Any directly quoted, paraphrased or summarized information should be referenced or cited in text and then included on the Works Cited page.   Thus, on this page one finds the full bibliographic or publication information of each source cited in the report/essay. 
        The author’s name and the title of the piece should be included in the essay text along with whatever information item you have borrowed or used.  This in-text reference may appear as a parenthetical citation (i.e. a set of parentheses like the one I am using now) containing the author's last name and perhaps a page number (for print sources typically) or text title.  Sometimes an article or source being used may have no author named; in such instances, use the text title as the key term, the website name, or the most direct means of identifying the source.  Do not put URLs in essay text.

At the following URLs you will find discussion of the MLA guidelines and illustrations for integrating sources:


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    Essay 3/Short Report, draft due today, week 6 (500 words):  Use of references, formatting of quotations, and the avoidance of plagiarism is part of the essay practice.  Learning how to find and use reference sources correctly and purposefully is an essential aspect of writing about subjects beyond your immediate experience and one that requires good reading skills and some measure of critical thinking and judgment.  
   Addressing current events and topics in the media allows you to tap the interest of readers who want to stay current and well-informed, and allows you to enter and shape the discussion as one who is well-informed and has something to add to the discussion, be it only your opinion. Use direct quotation in support of your claims, but don't overload the essay with quotations.  Your voice should be the dominant voice.  Identify the various sources you have used for content by author and/or title of work and tie the source information clearly to the specific content borrowed.  There should be no confusion about which item of information came from where, or whose speech we hear in a passage. The in-text reference information provides the key word or words that will head each entry in the Works Cited list that follows the report. In essay 5, however, I am not requiring a Works Cited list.  

Checklist:
*Make your thesis claim clear and provide adequate evidence to develop and support it
*Acknowledge all material borrowed from source texts.  
* Use quotation marks around all language borrowed word for word
*Provide a clear presentation of the visual artifact(s)
*Identify the author of each source in text or in parentheses following the information item.
*Use the article or website title as a source reference for works without identified authors.
*Review the basic pattern for creating entries on the Works Cited page.



The following URLs explain and demonstrate the ways that quotations of prose and poetry are presented and punctuated, along with whatever citations may be required:  

                               http://www.writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/QPA_quoting.html

                               http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/03/


The Works Cited format is here illustrated for some commonly used sources:

Individual Author of a Book
Hazzard, Shirley.  The Great Fire.  New York.  Farrar, 2003. Print.

Article from a Printed Magazine
Jenkins, Lee.  “He’s Gotta Play Hurt.”  Sports Illustrated. 26 Oct. 2009:  42-3. Print.

Article from an Online Magazine
Bowden, Mark.  “Jihadists in Paradise.”  The Atlantic.com.  Atlantic Monthly Group, Mar. 2007.  Web. 8 Mar. 2007.

Article from an Online Newspaper
Richmond, Riva.  “Five Ways to Keep Online Criminals at Bay.”  New York Times.  New York Times, 19 May 2010.  Web.  29 May 2010.

Selection from an Online Book
Webster, Augusta.  “Not Love.”  A Book of Rhyme.  London, 1881.  Victorian Women Wrtiers Project. Web. 8 Mar. 2007.
  
Organization Web Page
“Library Statistics.”  American Library Association.  Amer. Lib. Assn.  2010 Web. 26 Feb. 2010.

Film
Lord of the Rings:  The Return of the King.  Dir. Peter Jackson.  New Line Cinema, 2003. Film.

Program on Television or Radio
“The Wounded Platoon.”  Frontline.  PBS.  WGBH, Boston, 18 May 2010.  Television.

Online Video Clip
Murphy, Beth.  "Tips for a Good Profile Piece."  Project:  Report. YouTube, 7 Sept. 2008. Web. 19 Sept. 2008.
Advertisement
Feeding America.  Advertisement.  Time.  21 Dec. 2009:  59.  Print.

Comic or Cartoon
Adams, Scott.  “Dilbert.”  Comic Strip.  Denver Post 1 Mar. 2010:  8C. Print.

Personal, Telephone, or E-mail Interview
Boyd, Dierdra.  Personal Interview. 5 Feb. 2012.



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Essay practice to be completed in class (or at home):  In short form (250-350 words)  introduce, describe, and comment on the structure, development and theme(s) of the poem “Illumination,” by Eric Paul Shaffer, or "Gray," by Philip Deaver.  Use slashes to show line breaks when quoting passages of three lines or less; use the block format for quotation of four or more successive lines.  

Illumination                                       by Eric Paul Shaffer 

On those cold, clear winter mornings, I rise in the dark, and I sit
         beneath a lamp with a pen and paper in a circle of light
barely bright enough for the work. The window beside me is black
and blank, and soon I’m staring only through the window of the page
at whatever I’m drawing from ink and concentration. Hours pass,
         and, always when I least expect it, there’s a sudden tide of light
as the sun crests the mountain. When the first rays flood the fields,
the thin yellow curtain behind me brightens, and the room swells
         with light. Everything is suddenly golden and illuminated,
and for just that one moment, I make the glorious and forgivable
     mistake of thinking it has something to do with me.


Gray                                          by Philip Deaver 

This was our pretty gray kitten,
hence her name; who was born
in our garage and stayed nearby
her whole life. There were allergies;
so she was, as they say,
an outside cat.
But she loved us. For years,
she was at our window.
Sometimes, a paw on the screen
as if to want in, as if
to be with us
the best she could.
She would be on the deck,
at the sliding door.
She would be on the small
sill of the window in the bathroom.
She would be at the kitchen
window above the sink.
We'd go to the living room;
anticipating that she'd be there, too,
hop up, look in.
She'd be on the roof,
she'd be in a nearby tree.
She'd be listening
through the wall to our family life.
She knew where we were,
and she knew where we were going
and would meet us there.
Little spark of consciousness,
calm kitty eyes staring
through the window.

After the family broke, 
and when the house was about to sell,
I walked around it for a last look.
Under the eaves, on the ground,
there was a path worn in the dirt,
tight against the foundation --
small padded feet, year after year,
window to window.

When we moved, we left her
to be fed by the people next door.
Months after we were gone,
they found her in the bushes
and buried her by the fence.
So many years after,
I can't get her out of my mind


The following URLs explain and demonstrate the ways that quotations of prose and poetry are presented and punctuated, along with whatever citations may be required:  

                               http://www.writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/QPA_quoting.html

                               http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/03/

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The final draft of your narrative essay (2) is due week 7, at the beginning of class.

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Essay 4 (due week 9, 500-750 words):  An EyeWitness/Field Report:  You must attend in person a local event, community function, business enterprise, entertainment venue, museum, restaurant or hotel establishment, nature preserve or park, area of historical interest, etcetera– in order to gather information from direct experience.  You cannot rely on the reports of others or the site's own published information alone.  The writing of the piece requires you bring to readers the vicarious experience of being there in person. themselves; that is, by engaging readers in your own experience on the ground.  Background research may help fill out and provide context for the report of course, and you are encouraged to find out as much as you can in the way of origins or history of the establishment, event or area for possible inclusion in the report.  



     Reviews and descriptions of cultural fare–of nature parks, historical attractions, art exhibits and fairs, live music shows, restaurants, bars, and clubs old and new, sporting events, lectures, book signings and discussions, community classes and workshops –serve to inform people of what's going on about town and provide them incentive to get out and experience some of what the area has to offer.     In this assignment you must report on a local place or local event from an eye-witness perspective–you must go there, experience whatever is on offer, and write about it in such a way that readers feel they have gotten to see and know the place through your first-hand experience of it.
     The particular focus and perspective you bring to your subject,   your knowledge and ideas and observations of it, and the degree of interest and engagement with the subject you show–these are central to the essay’s success.  Whether you are visiting a park, a beach, a museum, theater, restaraunt, etcetera–descriptions of the scene or environs, the activity, the individual artworks, performances, ambiance, food, service, etcetera will bring the piece to life and convey a you-are-there sensation to readers.  Your readers will be relying on your knowledge, powers of observation and storytelling abilities.    Your informed judgment, taste, and opinions will be an important element.   approach you create, the thesis idea controlling and unifying the work, will make for certain selections and emphases that reflect you the observer, your history, interests, tastes, etc.  
    The eye-witness report is a species of primary research.  You may find you want background reading on whatever aspects of your subject require context, to fully develop your thesis or main ideas.  To repeat, this essay will require you actually go somewhere in person and record material facts and observations before putting the piece together.  Your thesis tells you what to include, to emphasize, and what to ignore.  The essay should run a minimum of 5oo-6oo words, including introductory, body, and closing paragraphs, and title.

          Remember the who, what, where, when, why roster of specifics.

If you were to visit an exhibit, you would include the museum name, location, and featured artist(s), including the exhibit’s run dates.  

Focus would necessarily be on some theme observed in one or more works or overall.  You would identify representative works (by title) and present a verbal description–medium, size, subject, form, and color–so that readers can "see" the work and understand the conclusions you draw from it.  If you were to visit a natural area, you might tie the visit in to some current news (a news "hook") or ongoing area of interest (natural history/studies, ecology, environmental justice, marine life, art) to create audience appeal, to lend purpose and weight to the piece.  Food culture is of great interest to many these days and offers many choices for primary research or "eye-witness" reports–green markets, restaraunts, bars, etcetera.

If you go to a museum the primary focus would be to see the various exhibits and selectively cover what you find most interesting.  The URL of the NSU Museum of Art on Las Olas:  http://nsuartmuseum.org  
In fact, there are several museums in the downtown area, including  The Old Ft. Lauderdale 

Historical Museum and another devoted to science and discovery.


     The field report (#4), 500- 700 words, will be due week 9.  Those of you still to present an essay reading may do so then. 

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Essay 4:  You must identify and  explore a subject or idea for a short research report.   The topic is yours to choose.  Locate reading material relevant to whatever line of inquiry you intend and begin developing the work.  In this essay of 600 words you put across a claim made persuasive and credible by virtue of supporting facts, expert opinion, testimonials, logical inquiry, visuals, and, perhaps, emotional appeals to the reader's values.  A film field trip and subsequent review could be used for this report.